I’m still waiting for an email with the first three chapters! Maybe a different eye to look at it will spark something?

You need to stop angsting over it and get that sucker out into the world! It’s been too long now. I love that story and want to see it published asap!!!

Good luck!! But you won’t need it. If you love the story, the good stuff will come.

I’ve never totally embraced the whole “blow their socks off” from the get go thing though. Action I get, but I don’t think I’ve ever read a book that I could not put down from page ONE. That commitment usually kicks in about Chapter 3 – depending upon the length of the chapters, of course

Good writing vibes! E